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December 17, 2003
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~But I can't help the feeling
I could blow through the ceiling
If I just turn and run ~
-Fake Plastic Trees
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prints: Zazzle
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my stock account: ~gearstock
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But I also do have a small problem with the picture. I would like to see a greater contrast between the dark areas and the face. Even at the full scale, it seems to blend-in too much to the rest of the picture. I think that a little bit of brightness/contrast in photoshop would make it outstanding, in my opinion.
I get the impression that the "flying" pieces are glass, based mostly on their shape. Some effects added to those pieces would be great. It would give it the definite feeling of glass.
Don't take all this criticism as that I don't like your work. I think it's great and original. Wil a little bit of " polish" you can produce some jaw-dropping work.
i really appreciate your suggestions and criticism, they are very constructive.
i agree with you, so i'll try to fix up the problems...
thx again
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prints: Zazzle
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my stock account: ~gearstock
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I see there's another post, so I'll read that and see what you have.
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The art of Antti Isosomppi
Isosomppi.com
anatheme's prints
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prints: Zazzle
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my stock account: ~gearstock
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